Typographic art

This is my very first attempt at making anything with words.
What do you think?

The Shelf

Please meet the toys that live on Melanie's toy shelf.










There is a bit of rivalry on the shelf between the toy's Melanie's Big sister made for her vs the ones her brother got from the shop's. You see Melanie loves them all but the twins from the shop feel like they are better then the hand made ones and plot to get all of Melanie's Love and attentions.

pic the diffrents, ha ha

this is my attempt to re-make this image below.
I chose to leave some things out, and other i could not work out how to do.